Across The Way Thread #15177
poem
Created Bymikez
Created DateSun, Nov 02, 2003
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mikez11/2/2003 3:50:00 AM
Sofia*11/2/2003 6:30:01 AM
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mikezSubjectpoem
PostedSun, Nov 02, 2003 03:50AM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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Everyday River im still missing you,
Admiring all the things you could do.

I try to forget you sometimes so I dont become obsesed,
But everytime I try to forget you I just become depressed.

Because to me you were the best kind of friend anyone could know,
>From your early years I saw you on tv and watched you grow.

From a little kid to a adult your acting was so grand,
So real and so captivating nothing ever seem planned.

You had so much music in your soul River,
All your music melodys make me quiver.

Very painfull feelings of missing you,
I really loved everything that you do.

When I see a sign with the word "River" in its name,
I cant help to think of you and feel so much pain.

Never did I think I would feel this way for a stranger,
But you were a shining light when my life was in danger.

A reason to live and do better in life you provided,
You convinced me our world was becomming divided.

But you never gave up on your beliefs untill the very end,
Love you gave to the planet and so much more to send.

You spent so much of your life in your dreams,
An often sometimes you were never seen.

So mature in life compared to most our age.
You knew you had purpose and focused your rage.

A slave to whats real and important to us all,
The Sunset Stripe was were you would fall.

Oh such a perfect day for you to jam at the viper room,
How could you have known that it might be your doom.

So if wonders really do happen then I will see you again,
Maby this time River we can really be friends.
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PostedSun, Nov 02, 2003 06:30AM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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This poem is so beautiful.
It's really touching.
Thank's for sharing it.


Sofia @);-
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Hi Mike!
Simply Awesome! Your poem is full of feelings and emotions. I am
totally moved by it. I looked at your words and felt like everything
around me is frozen. I was so spreechless. Thank you, Mike for
sharing it with us. I can connect with your feeling towards River...

take care,
Debbie
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mikezSubjectRe: poem
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Thanks for replying Sofia, and thanks for your comments.
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Hi Mike!
Simply Awesome! Your poem is full of feelings and emotions. I am
totally moved by it. I looked at your words and felt like
everything
around me is frozen. I was so spreechless. Thank you, Mike for
sharing it with us. I can connect with your feeling towards
River...

take care,
Debbie

---- Thank you for your comments Debbie.
I like to write sometimes, but I dont really have a best time
to write, so its just when something comes to mind.
If it feels good I write it down.

I have not wrote any new poems about river in over a year, but at one
point I had a burst of ideas, I have other poems if you wanna read them
I will try and send them to ya or post them here.
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