Across The Way Thread #17849
Poem
Created Bysinead
Created DateFri, Feb 04, 2005
Created Time04:30PM GMT

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sinead2/4/2005 5:18:01 PM
Julia2/5/2005 5:54:43 AM
Sarah.2/5/2005 6:10:01 AM
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AuthorMessage #41947
sineadSubjectPoem
PostedFri, Feb 04, 2005 05:18PM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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It turns out a free French class is a perfect setting for
inspiration lol, this isn't that good, but I've never pretended to
be good at poetry lol.

I know you're still here, never gone.
But some can't see, it's all so wrong.
I wish I could have told you everything,
To hear your laugh, or watch you sing.
But God wanted us to be apart.
He knew your destiny from the start.
I know you're in peace in the sky.
I know I'll meet you when I die.
How long will that be? Can I wait?
I hate that I don't know, I hate your fate.
If God's so great, why'd he take the man?
The man who fought to take a stand?
But one tree's saved, an animal's life new,
All because he changed one person's view.
You didn't know what it was like to be old.
For unseen miseries came untold.
In the moon's light they stole you away,
I wish we could have helped you before that fateful day.
Never telling that something wasn't right
If we'd have known, you might have lived that night.
Risen so fast, fallen faster when the truth was told,
When we realised what we'd done, our whole hearts turned cold.
But I can think of you and allow a smile,
At least you were here, if only a while.



Most of it I actually wrote there now lol, talk about inspiration
rushes
lol thanks for reading

love and peace


AuthorMessage #41951
JuliaSubjectRe: Poem
PostedSat, Feb 05, 2005 05:54AM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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That's a great poem, sinead. I love it.
AuthorMessage #41952
Sarah.SubjectRe: Poem
PostedSat, Feb 05, 2005 06:10AM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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Sinead face it - you're a poet!
Get writing some more!

rio 4 ever
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