Across The Way Thread #22270
Falling apart
Created ByChristopher
Created DateSat, Oct 13, 2007
Created Time02:20PM GMT

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Christopher10/13/2007 2:20:47 PM
Edward10/13/2007 7:38:27 PM
Ovation US Legend10/28/2007 1:17:54 PM
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ChristopherSubjectFalling apart
PostedSat, Oct 13, 2007 02:20PM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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Hey guys.
I don't want to be annoyin' but I wrote a new song and I would like to know, if the lyrics are correct.
Or are there any mistakes in it?
Would you mind telling me?

?Falling apart?
written by: Chrys Chambers

Now there?s nothing left to say.
You shut your mouth.
And I can?t go on that way.
I need to get out.

Falling faster this time.
Falling deeper and hard.
You?re just one step away.
From breaking my heart.

I?m falling apart
Right into the dark.
I can?t see clear.
It?s breaking my heart.
I?m falling for you.
Don?t wanna go through.
And I?m standing outside alone.

Been hurt too many times.
It got out of control.
Hard to see. I was totally wrong.
I?m losing it all.

Falling faster this time.
Falling deeper and hard.
You?re just one step away.
From breaking my heart.

I?m falling apart
Right into the dark.
I can?t see clear.
It?s breaking my heart.
I?m falling for you.
Don?t wanna go through.
And you left me outside alone.

Thans a lot
Chrys
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EdwardSubjectRe: Falling apart
PostedSat, Oct 13, 2007 07:38PM GMTMethodWeb-Site
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Hi Chrys...
I'm not sure just what you mean about everything being correct. Are you talking about your use of English?

If so, then let me say that the words make perfect sense. No corrections needed at all.

Thanks for sharing it. I hope you post a performance of it for us.


Edward
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Ovation US LegendSubjectRe: Falling apart
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Hi Chrys!
I think it's great! I love the lyrics. I've seen another of the songs that you've posted here earlier, and I loved the lyrics to that one too
I'm very much into music myself (I actually own three guitars and a piano, yey) and me and my friends are planning on starting our own band...
You give me a lot of inspiration, you kow that?
Thanx for sharing the lovely lyrics, hope we'll hear the real deal soon

~there is a Rio in all of us~
//Felicia

-->The End is something you can't
tell Until it falls upon You.
Love & Peace<--
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